Master the Elements of Pre-Writing and Build Scripts That Hollywood Can’t Ignore

Say Goodbye to Wasted Drafts – Learn How to Structure, Refine, and Craft Industry-Ready Stories

Need help to turn your ideas into scripts that stand out? The Pre-Writing Workshop gives you a clear path to success. You’ll develop the tools to pitch stories that resonate with executives confidently, avoid the rewrites that derail most screenwriters, and create scripts that reflect your unique voice.

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More Than a Screenwriting Program

What Makes Breakout Story Different?

We do things differently. Unlike traditional screenwriting workshops taught by former writers, script consultants or teachers, our program is led by an active Hollywood literary manager who’s working in the industry in real-time. With up-to-date insights into what writing styles sell, what producers are looking for, and how the industry landscape is evolving, we bring you the knowledge you need to succeed in today’s competitive market.
Unlike other services that simply provide script notes, our approach is uniquely interactive. We focus on collaborative discussions around the five essential pillars of a great screenplay: Concept, Character, World, Story, and Point of View. This ensures your script is built on a foundation designed to captivate and succeed.
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Free Tutorial - Learn How to Write Your "Hotel California"

Learn how to Write a Remarkable Screenplay that Will Work for You Every Time
Discover why the pre-writing process is the most critical step in screenwriting. In this free tutorial, you’ll learn about evolving your script ideas and avoiding the pitfalls that cause most scripts to fail. Whether you’re just starting or looking to refine your process, this session will give you the tools to think like a pro.
What You’ll Learn

Practice Doesn’t Make Perfect -Practice Makes Permanent

Just because you continue to write and churn out scripts, doesn't mean you're going to improve as a writer. Especially if you're using the wrong techniques and continue making the same mistakes.

Passes are Solely Subjective

Screenwriting is a subjective medium, but there are elements to a script that, if done correctly, will make it objectively good and vice versa, if done incorrectly will make it objectively bad.

Writing is Pre-Writing

The most important work happens before the actual act of writing begins. Like a chef who needs to properly prep his ingredients before he starts cooking, writers need to properly develop certain key pillars to their script before they start writing.

Master the Foundation of Screenwriting with the Pre-Writing Workshop

Six in-depth video lessons designed to help you develop industry-ready scripts before you even start writing
The Pre-Writing Workshop is the essential program for aspiring and seasoned screenwriters who want to write scripts that captivate audiences and get noticed by industry professionals. Unlike traditional classes focusing on drafting, this program is about what happens before you write your first line.

You’ll learn the five key concepts every successful screenplay builds on while saving time and energy by perfecting your ideas before diving into the writing process.
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Module 1: Introduction

The Foundation of Great Stories

Module 2: Concept Development

Crafting a Clear Vision

Module 3: Character Design

Bringing Your Cast to Life

Module 4: World-Building

Beyond the Setting

Module 5: Story Structure

The Blueprint for Success

Module 6: Point of View

Shaping the Audience Experience

Why This Workshop Stands Out

Real-Time Insights
Taught by an active Hollywood literary manager with real-time industry insight.
Stand Out to Producers Today
Focuses on what sells today and what makes scripts stand out to producers.
Streamline Your Script
Saves time by refining your ideas without needing a completed draft.
Crafting Excellence
Perfect for beginners and professionals looking to elevate their craft.
Collaborate with a Hollywood literary manager to sharpen your skills and craft scripts that captivate.

Improve Your Storytelling with Custom-Tailored Coaching

If you’re ready to take your screenwriting to the next level, our personalized coaching sessions will help you reach your full potential. Whether you’re polishing a promising idea or troubleshooting a tricky script element, this is your opportunity to receive expert-level guidance from someone actively working in the industry.
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One-on-One Deep Dives

Dive straight into the heart of your story with private, intensive feedback uniquely tailored to your creative vision. Together, we’ll dissect and strengthen key aspects of your script, from character arcs to plot structure, to ensure your screenplay shines.
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Dynamic Group Sessions

Thrive in a collaborative setting where you’ll exchange ideas, gain fresh perspectives, and learn from the insights provided to others. These sessions foster a creative, energizing environment perfect for sparking new inspiration and solving shared challenges.

Perfect For:

Writers seeking strategic feedback to craft a standout story.
Professionals aiming to fine-tune scripts and land opportunities in TV or film.
Creators eager to grow within a supportive, like-minded community.

Perfect For:

Writers seeking strategic feedback to craft a standout story.
Professionals aiming to fine-tune scripts and land opportunities in TV or film.
Creators eager to grow within a supportive, like-minded community.
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DISCLAIMER : This platform was designed for coaching and educational purposes only. It was not designed for me to sign clients as a manager. Signing up for coaching services does not mean you are represented by me nor will it lead to representation. If your intention is to seek representation from me, please do not sign up for coaching.

See Why Writers Love the Pre-Writing Workshop

Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client

Meet Conrad Sun: From Filmmaker Dreams to Screenwriting Mentor

Turn Your Writing Passion Into a Professional Breakout Story
Like so many others, Conrad Sun dreamed of becoming a filmmaker when he moved to LA in 2009. Accepted into the prestigious Peter Stark Producing Program at USC Film School, he immersed himself in the industry, learning the ins and outs of storytelling and production. But it was during this journey that Conrad discovered his true passion: collaborating with screenwriters.

After spending two years as a development executive at a production company, Conrad transitioned into literary management in 2014 – a role that allowed him to fully dedicate himself to empowering writers. As the co-founder of his own literary management company, Conrad has spent nearly a decade helping writers succeed in staffing and development, whether selling a screenplay, landing a staffing gig, or sharpening their craft.

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